Marem Ruth > Status Update
Marem Ruth
is 45% done
It's less repetitive now, but I'm not feeling Ha Jin's style at all.
— Oct 28, 2020 10:38AM
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Marem Ruth
is 76% done
These poems are just not hitting me in an emotional way.
— Oct 29, 2020 04:08PM
Marem Ruth
is 28% done
Good so far. The language is a little clumsy, but I like the metaphors and consistent imagery, though it's starting to grow a bit stale.
— Oct 27, 2020 11:08AM
