Dani’s Reviews > A Broken Queen > Status Update
Dani
is on page 178 of 419
This is a pet peeve of mine for sure. Just as things start to get interesting the chapter ends and a new POV takes over. This book is spending way too much time on secondary characters. And even when it gets you interested in what's going on with them the book suddenly switches to a new one. It ruins any flow
— Nov 03, 2020 10:04AM
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Dani
is on page 125 of 419
Everytime I open this book to read about yet another side characters boring day I close it again and stare at the wall wondering what I'm doing with my limited free time.
— Nov 02, 2020 03:54AM
Dani
is on page 114 of 419
So Thalen has won a game of Fantasy Chess after never having played a single game but he's read a couple books once, against someone who is a regular and skilled player. The same Thalen who is an amazing commander after having read a book. I'm trying very hard not to grind my teeth over this ridiculous Gary Sue of a character.
— Oct 30, 2020 09:46AM
