Book Wyvern’s Reviews > A Question of Destiny > Status Update
Book Wyvern
is 64% done
Omfg, stoooop with the 'his dad' 'his father' 'his dad' 'Dad said' the audience gets it, no need to keep reminding them every sentence.
— Nov 12, 2020 07:48PM
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Book Wyvern
is 87% done
Why is there more of a romantic connection and a tad bit more feeling than the main love interest with this side character?
— Nov 16, 2020 08:51AM
Book Wyvern
is 43% done
So...a jump to two months later. We're supposed to be rooting for Andy and Lucy here. So we're just gonna miss all that bonding? Honestly, a lose/lose here. If they are still on him being silent and still slogging through saying 10 words to each other, why the jump? If they are all of a sudden so close to each other, why the jump? I don't care about all this other stuff, if this is supposed to be romance, give me it.
— Nov 10, 2020 11:37AM
Book Wyvern
is 36% done
I'm on chapter 11 and this is just slogging through. They've barely said 10 words to each other and she's thinking of taking up with someone else. Just get on with it.
— Nov 10, 2020 10:47AM
