Lydia’s Reviews > Major O > Status Update

The main MC have had all of an evening of interaction, she takes him home, they jump each others bones and with out trying he gives her her first O, i'm just believing this or really connection with any of this

Almost 3 hours into the story, THREE, so the read time 5hr 35 min, the two main characters FINALLY see each other with 2 hr and 49 min left. So now you have 2hr and 30 min to make a second chance romance work out, yeah . . .

2 hr and 15 min and he finally runs into the sister, but not the main female lead. How again is this a romance? and now he is checking out the sister and I'm assuming eventual sister-in-law

1 1/2 hr in and still no meeting of main characters

The POV shifts are hard to keep track of, narrator does not switch his voice for when in female head, so until the female has lines to say out loud you don't know you are in Abby's head