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Skipped the Jack and the Beanstalk retelling. It didn't grab me. It seemed like I should have known more about the world than what was being shown.
— Nov 23, 2020 12:25PM
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If the Louboutin Fits (Cinderella retelling)
Get an editor. This story was also way too much like a giant corporation's version. Because of that, it seemed the author couldn't decide when to have magic, and the story didn't make much sense. For instance, stepmother's motto is to marry and divorce rich men, but for some unclear reason she kills Ella's father.
— Nov 23, 2020 08:23AM
Get an editor. This story was also way too much like a giant corporation's version. Because of that, it seemed the author couldn't decide when to have magic, and the story didn't make much sense. For instance, stepmother's motto is to marry and divorce rich men, but for some unclear reason she kills Ella's father.
