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"you know I did save your life tonight. In some parts, that sort of thing engenders a certain amount of... Gratitude."
She stilled at the suggestion. He was suddenly concerned that she might take him up on what had been a bluff.
This is written like a man. He says this to her while holding onto her and she's asked him to let go. She's probably worried he's gonna rape her, not contemplating consentual sex in the wood
— Dec 02, 2020 09:54AM
She stilled at the suggestion. He was suddenly concerned that she might take him up on what had been a bluff.
This is written like a man. He says this to her while holding onto her and she's asked him to let go. She's probably worried he's gonna rape her, not contemplating consentual sex in the wood
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Woof. I can already tell the writing style is going to take some getting used to. "He sensed more than saw." Is an actual complete sentence in this book.
— Nov 29, 2020 08:18AM
