Lushr’s Reviews > Micro > Status Update

The editor really should have put their foot down and said "the first 200 pages - get it down to 80". Seriously there are characters that don't reappear for 24 chapters, that's 230 pages! It's just plain fatuous story telling.

This book has shifted and changed so many times already. I hope it's not gonna turn into another Shrink Ray story, but considering the unpredictability of the story so far, it's probably going to stay interesting!

This book has shifted and changed so many times already. I hope it's not gonna turn into another Shrink Ray story, but considering the unpredictability of the story so far, it's probably going to stay interesting!