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Sarah
is 26% done
There is this Evaraine character that we have never actually met yet but is being constantly referred to. Evaraine told me this, Evaraine expects that, Evaraine would act like this, Evaraine would have said that. Maybe we should have actually been introduced to this character before reading a whole story about someone pretending to be her.
— Dec 22, 2020 02:52PM
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Sarah
is 26% done
I really like the “mysterious/enchanted knight” thing going on but I really dislike what is happening with the heroine. It’s annoying how we are simply told by the author that she is strong and powerful and competent, yet she’s in this situation where we read her often stuttering and simpering and confused and nervous. It’s not landing well for me. If she was behaving confidently this would reading better.
— Dec 22, 2020 02:36PM
