Summer Seeds’s Reviews > Shadowflesh > Status Update

I found this thing tucked in a pile of junk I brought home when I transferred from R-MC. Maybe I should actually go back and try to finish it? I mean, I did start it over a year ago...

So far, Aileen is kind of bratty, and I'm not sure if I like her character or not. As for the writing itself, I feel like the complex sentence structure and some of the word choice might be too smart for the targeted audience. Also, too many adjectives (I know, how is that even possible?). They are abundant and don't always flow well in the sentence.

So far, Aileen is kind of bratty, and I'm not sure if I like her character or not. As for the writing itself, I feel like the complex sentence structure and some of the word choice might be too smart for the targeted audience. Also, too many adjectives (I know, how is that even possible?). They are abundant and don't always flow well in the sentence.

So far, Aileen is kind of bratty, and I'm not sure if I like her character or not. As for the writing itself, I feel like the complex sentence structure and some of the word choice might be too smart for the targeted audience. Also, too many adjectives (I know, how is that even possible?). They are abundant and don't always flow well in the sentence.

So far, Aileen is kind of bratty, and I'm not sure if I like her character or not. As for the writing itself, I feel like the complex sentence structure and some of the word choice might be too smart for the targeted audience. Also, too many adjectives (I know, how is that even possible?). They are abundant and don't always flow well in the sentence.