Joshua Allerton’s Reviews > Greegs & Ladders > Status Update

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

The plot has finally sorted itself out and now has the drive and passion needed to make a story interesting. The satire is working as a result, and I just wished the book started like this.

Structure of plot is an issue. Too much explaining, not enough showing. The only thing making me read on is to learn more about Krimshaw, whose emotions and events being centre to the story.