Cheryl > Status Update

I REALLY want to like this book....I like Lilith Saintcrow...and I feel the story line could be great. So far, sadly, I find the main character a bit annoying and feel like I’m reading old English. The use of words that are made up for this world, with no real description or explanation of what they are...also makes it hard to follow. I will keep plodding thru and hope it gets better.