Elaine White’s Reviews > Deceived > Status Update

I originally bought the paperback version, way back when, so when I saw they were being revamped, with gorgeous new covers and new material, I just had to buy them again. However...after reading story 1: Deceived, I'm disappointed to say that there are a lot of editing issues still remaining. I love the extra material, but these problems really should have been caught, when republishing them.