Keith ’s Reviews > Into a Dark Realm > Status Update

Struggling with this one a little. It's just not grabbing my attention. I think the biggest issue is my dislike of fractured story telling and this one is telling three or is it four story arcs and just switching constantly between them. It's my least favorite way to write and annoying when it's two lines I have to keep track of more than that and it really begins to bug me. Plus it's dragging along slowly.