Shey.strides ’s Reviews > The Princess and the Paladin > Status Update

Typographical error: "This fortress is an abandon tomb of the Carens." It should be : abandoned tomb..

We suddenly learn one of the pirates have some kind of power and I'm confused if it's an innate talent or through the use of a weapon. It gets confusing at this point. Then the princess' reaction to someone's passing is to think about how exhausted she was or lacking sleep and not showing some sort of grief for someone who had helped her survive. Hmm, not liking this shallowness.

I'm liking these pirates, the princess is definitely in good company. Would love to know more about Anne's sword, it seems it has great power. Storam is an interesting character, perhaps they'll encounter him again?

On the first paragraph, I stumbled while reading: "if they took the bother of inviting..." Next paragraph: "and had not made the bother of issuing a summons..." It might have been a smoother read if it just simply said: and have not issued a summons or have not bothered issuing. Of course that's just my opinion and personal taste.