Melesse’s Reviews > Crave > Status Update

Uh, yea. Why would 3 angels on protective detail in 2 places fall for the "you texted me" gambit & BOTH of the two watching the Childes go to Jim? They can instantaneously transport themselves places, likely faster & DEFINITELY more reliably than any SMS could, so it makes no sense to communicate that way. Goddamn, that just makes the tension fail right at a major pivot point for the climax. Bleh.