Karen’s Reviews > The Haunting of Daisy Dawkins: Coyote Mansion / Winchester Mansions > Status Update
Karen
is 50% done
Just finished the first book and I’m loving this author. The story was captivating, and I couldn’t wait to see what came next!
That said, the book could be improved through a good proofreading for a few grammatical errors, missing words, occasional word choice, and care with simple consistency in character names.
If the small things were fixed, I would rate book one as 4-1/2 stars!
— Mar 08, 2021 08:02AM
That said, the book could be improved through a good proofreading for a few grammatical errors, missing words, occasional word choice, and care with simple consistency in character names.
If the small things were fixed, I would rate book one as 4-1/2 stars!
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