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Im having issues with this already: 1. Characterisation is off. We learn tonnes about both main protagonists outwit their inter-character dialogues (thus whats point of their conversations from reader viewpoint?) 2. Prose is mechanical and devoid of the angst & passion that ought be there. Hmm... Boring?
Nov 24, 2013 03:52PM
All Bets Are Off (Mountain Boys, #1)

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