Dean MacKinnon-Thomson’s Reviews > All Bets Are Off > Status Update
Dean MacKinnon-Thomson
is 38% done
Im having issues with this already: 1. Characterisation is off. We learn tonnes about both main protagonists outwit their inter-character dialogues (thus whats point of their conversations from reader viewpoint?) 2. Prose is mechanical and devoid of the angst & passion that ought be there. Hmm... Boring?
— Nov 24, 2013 03:52PM
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