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CONFLICT: The main conflict in my book is "character vs nature". Doug really doesn't like the environment he lives in. The town looks like a dump and has older homes with trash everywhere with a lot of rude and snobby people, he says that "town is a big retire home" because a lot of older people live there.

The supporting characters In my book is Lil. She is Dougs friend and she helps him get to know the area because he is new to the town. Lil was kinda mean at the start but after they got to know each-other they became friends.

CLIMAX: Mr Spicers deli got robbed recently. The police went searching for the robbers and could not find anyone so they went to Dougs house because he worked there. After they interrogating the Swieteks they became suspicious of Doug . Everybody was careful around him and even the school he will be going too soon was not happy with him.

Protagonist- The main character in my book is Doug Swietek he is a very outgoing person that is short and has a few friends. Doug lives with his dad, mom, and brother they are all jerks except for his mom. He has long black hair with light skin and brown eyes.

The purpose of this book is to show the life of Doug a 13-year-old boy whose family moves to a new city. He has to start his life over with a new school and new friends. With this comes all new struggles for a young boy growing up. The audience this caters to is young teenagers because in life we all struggle with something it's how we overcome it that makes us better.

Remake again: In this Book, there is a lot of things to visualize. The thing that caught my eye is when Doug and his family started to talk about how terrible their neighborhood was. I started to picture how the town they lived in looked when Doug explained how filthy the streets were and how some of the houses had broken planks and windows. It reminded me how an abandoned neighborhood would look.

REMAKE: In this Book, there is a lot of things to visualize. The thing that caught my eye is when Doug and his family started to talk about how terrible their neighborhood was. I started to picture how the town they lived in looked when Doug explained how filthy the streets were and how some of the houses had broken planks and windows. It made Remi ded me how a abandon neighbor hood would look.

I think Doug's neighborhood and the area he lives in looks very bad.
Doug and his parents are always complaining about the area. And they say the people there are always mean and snoby.

Remake: My prediction for the book is that Doug will eventually move back to his hometown. Doug's parents had been complaining about their house and town. He also listened in on his parents talking about moving, but they didn't say where to.

I think Doug Swieteck will reunite with his friends from his old school. I think this because he has heard their names before and has been having many random dreams. he even heard a teacher talk about his best friend Holling Hood Hood.