Maureen Sawyer’s Reviews > The Sanatorium > Status Update

So far I can't seem to get into it. The way it is written with short bursting 1 to 3 sentence paragraphs is preventing me from enjoying what sounds like a good story.There is a reason why you should vary your sentence lengths. Right now it feels like shot gun burst which destroys building atmosphere and hurts my eyes. I may have to do this one via audiobook where a narrator can hopefully add some personality to it.