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is 47% done
So far, this needed a huge TW for rape and violence. The characters are entirely flat and barely Round Table. You introduced me to angels and then disappeared those characters? The writing needs some work. Feels like someone is scripting a weird D&D campaign and elaborating the battle scenes as if it's a tabletop wargame with each shot being called/described.
— Apr 08, 2021 07:34AM

