Status Updates From The Brotherhood of Merlin (...

Learned that cully means friend.

So far, this needed a huge TW for rape and violence. The characters are entirely flat and barely Round Table. You introduced me to angels and then disappeared those characters? The writing needs some work. Feels like someone is scripting a weird D&D campaign and elaborating the battle scenes as if it's a tabletop wargame with each shot being called/described.

Couldn't get into this story. It's present tense and from a wierd narrator perspective. The prose reads as if it were machine translated and only superficially edited. Very dissapointed.