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the former form or ORIGIN is a simple robot but has a more expressive design than his stoic human form. How much stuff he can still do with just 2% energy makes no sense, how dumb is he that he has no spare? And hown can the other other two speak at supersonic speeds? By that logica they could not hear themselves. Too many inconsistencies, the good doesn't make up for it. I stop.

Ok, no page numbers so I make notes: good art, writing style is ok, the author can draw good looking and creepy, the whole "they have no feelings just quirks" makes no sense, these robots act totally emotional, inluding the protagonist, the robots mistaking the woman for a robot because their app (invented by her) speaks like she does, the author can write but there are plotholes (like the energy level) etc.

Four panti-shots in 2 pages? Please tell me she uses this to her advantage.