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Sara Luck
is 2% done
I'm literally 4 pages into this book and the author has used a pet peeve of mine. Flip flopping from 1st to 2nd person narrative. At this point it seems like the story is going to be in 2nd person, while the protagonist shares her "thoughts" in first person. This is fine, but put it in italics, or bold font, or a different font...just please differentiate. Ughh, I don't know why this is annoying to me. It just is.
— Dec 12, 2013 08:27PM
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