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Was this rushed to print without proper editing? On pages 74/75, there are two jarring (to me, anyway) errors, as well as some awkwardly constructed sentences.
Maggie swats her friend with a “sheath” of papers. ‘Sheaf’ is the correct choice.
Despite the steadily growing usage that says one can feel “a pit in [her] stomach”, one actually feels something like dread “in the pit” of one’s stomach.