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The main character is pretty annoying and selfish. At least the future self acknowledges it and I guess matured.
Charlie is not only puny in stature but also in character and personality. And ability. I’m not entirely sure how I’m supposed to view him, but currently not viewing him favorably.
What do they see in each other? She’s bored? He had nobody else? There’s no good explanation.
— Apr 20, 2021 02:24PM
Charlie is not only puny in stature but also in character and personality. And ability. I’m not entirely sure how I’m supposed to view him, but currently not viewing him favorably.
What do they see in each other? She’s bored? He had nobody else? There’s no good explanation.
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Page 4 and I already have two issues:
“It’s not a talent, I was born with it.” That is LITERALLY what a talent is. 🤦🏻♀️
She references the song “White Christmas” which wasn’t released until 1954 (I looked it up) and this part of the story was supposedly set in 1943.
Two very glaring mistakes that should have been caught in copy editing.
— Apr 18, 2021 05:19PM
“It’s not a talent, I was born with it.” That is LITERALLY what a talent is. 🤦🏻♀️
She references the song “White Christmas” which wasn’t released until 1954 (I looked it up) and this part of the story was supposedly set in 1943.
Two very glaring mistakes that should have been caught in copy editing.
