K. Piet’s Reviews > Roane > Status Update

I feel like I've been given no reason to believe there's more between Roane and Caitlyn than lust and beast-ness. The sudden lovey dovey HEA isn't doing it for me.

Enjoyed interaction of Caitlyn & Kelly. Amused by Ace & Zack. The drama about saying 'I love you' feels... tacked on.

All right. Previous comment explained. Only Roane gets to impregnate Caitlyn. Strange mixture of being able to control and yet not control themselves when their beasts are in charge.

So now Roane's cool with Caitlyn fucking everyone else for group unity, but they aren't allowed to touch her pussy... If it were explained somehow, I'd have an easier time buying it.

Don't understand having Elliot as a new POV this late in the book, but I'll say that seeing a bit of Caitlyn's progress and explanation about the crazy sex is just a little comforting.

Is it wrong for me to have only liked the sex scene for the brief M/M bit? Liked that Hale's beast wanted the familiar Roane instead of Caitlyn for once.

Dislike Roane's 180, lecturing the others about treating Caitlyn like a whore while that's what he did all damn night. However, I must admit that this is excellently written. I haven't been at all inhibited while reading, which is quite extraordinary. I'm usually super slow and have difficulty. This story reads incredibly smoothly. Props to the writer & her skill and editor.

Oh, jeez. They have the overwhelming urge to procreate because of being 'in heat' but Roane doesn't even give a damn that he might have impregnated her? It reeks of 'Why should I care? You're the one who begged for it and will deal with the pregnancy and kid.'

Still bothered by the way Caitlyn's character is treated as just some sex object by the men (except for Doc). I know it's pheromones, but still. I'm ready for plot beyond everyone wanting Caitlyn's pussy. -__-;

Kinda sad that all the 'mumbo-jumbo' Doc spouts makes complete sense to me. Yay for having a Kinesiology degree? XD