Laura May’s Reviews > Greegs & Ladders > Status Update

This book is starting to feel wordy for the sake of being wordy (no hypocrisy here). I LIKE it, but I'd also like to see an axe taken to it. In a metaphorical sense.

The perspective changes are really off-putting. Why was a chapter written in the first person?!

I'm really rather enjoying this! :D Bizarrity + absurdness and other made up words.