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‘This is an outdated practice,’ snapped Clara, the fire of feminism in her eyes. ‘I foresee that in future generations, women will be equal.’
The sweat of shame passed over Chester’s brow.
‘You are right,’ he said. ‘I will join the fight, Clara. In future years I will be a male suffragette.’
😂😂 I know the MC isn't meant to be a great writer but wow this is bad
— May 14, 2021 05:31AM
The sweat of shame passed over Chester’s brow.
‘You are right,’ he said. ‘I will join the fight, Clara. In future years I will be a male suffragette.’
😂😂 I know the MC isn't meant to be a great writer but wow this is bad
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Jemima
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Y'know if the point of the story is that the main character is insufferable and seems like someone you'd hate to be around in real life then they're sure doing a great job of getting there.
— May 14, 2021 06:28AM
Jemima
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I love him. I don’t know anything about this guy. Not his age, not his job, not even his name. But I love him.
— May 14, 2021 05:44AM
Jemima
is 12% done
‘This is an outdated practice,’ snapped Clara, the fire of feminism in her eyes. ‘I foresee that in future generations, women will be equal.’
The sweat of shame passed over Chester’s brow.
‘You are right,’ he said. ‘I will join the fight, Clara. In future years I will be a male suffragette.’
😂😂 I know the MC isn't meant to be a great writer but wow this is bad
— May 14, 2021 05:30AM
The sweat of shame passed over Chester’s brow.
‘You are right,’ he said. ‘I will join the fight, Clara. In future years I will be a male suffragette.’
😂😂 I know the MC isn't meant to be a great writer but wow this is bad
Jemima
is 12% done
Hmm I thought I'd enjoy this a bit more but so far I find the main character kinda... desperate? Like sis chill, you're on a writing retreat not a man-hunting retreat.
— May 13, 2021 10:56PM
