Jenn Powlison’s Reviews > Not a Drop to Drink > Status Update

I like this author, but this story has a few holes that I can't let go of. We've got a teenage girl who doesn't know the word "flirt" but who can listen to monologues about militia and IEDs without a question; she spotted electric light off in the distance but her closest neighbor didn't catch it; she had never heard music but asked Eli if he'd wrote a song on the guitar. Little things, but they're tough to ignore.