Duchess Brown’s Reviews > Deacon > Status Update

Noni’s relationship with her fiancé isn’t believable to me. I know that plenty of people are stuck in awful relationships but the way to make it more believable is for them to have genuine good moments. Jason just seems completely scummy, there’s not even any niceties. I’d only believe her staying with him if she was written to be a bit more desperate, but she’s not. It just reads as artificial