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Haley Kilgour
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There was a wrath of nervousness in the pit of her stomach? I’m almost positive wrath isn’t the word you’re looking for
— Jun 04, 2021 10:25AM
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Haley Kilgour
is on page 258 of 350
Piranhas are a freshwater fish. They are certainly not a danger to a boat in salt water
— Jun 04, 2021 10:31AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 252 of 350
Rigging is what keeps the sails in position. It is not how you get to the deck of a ship.
— Jun 04, 2021 10:27AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 235 of 350
A finishing move? What is this, mortal kombat?
— Jun 04, 2021 08:37AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 198 of 350
Wow... suddenly wording got even more awkward and nonsensical at times
— Jun 04, 2021 07:39AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 189 of 350
King “you made it back first so I will endeavor you”....
No... this is not the right word. Not even. A little.
— Jun 03, 2021 07:13AM
No... this is not the right word. Not even. A little.
Haley Kilgour
is on page 141 of 350
The spot where they spawned (in reference to the main trio). The word isn’t use wrong, it just sounds hella wrong
— Jun 03, 2021 06:39AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 134 of 350
To have been a deserter, Ikena would’ve first had to join the army then run away. So how can she be a deserted if she ran first then joined?
— Jun 03, 2021 06:31AM
Haley Kilgour
is on page 131 of 350
Couldn’t hide the distaste reel from her voice. I’m sorry, but what?
— Jun 03, 2021 06:29AM
