Haley Kilgour’s Reviews > Cloaked Shadows > Status Update

Piranhas are a freshwater fish. They are certainly not a danger to a boat in salt water

Rigging is what keeps the sails in position. It is not how you get to the deck of a ship.

There was a wrath of nervousness in the pit of her stomach? I’m almost positive wrath isn’t the word you’re looking for

A finishing move? What is this, mortal kombat?

Wow... suddenly wording got even more awkward and nonsensical at times

What’s With all the double indents?

King “you made it back first so I will endeavor you”....
No... this is not the right word. Not even. A little.

The spot where they spawned (in reference to the main trio). The word isn’t use wrong, it just sounds hella wrong

To have been a deserter, Ikena would’ve first had to join the army then run away. So how can she be a deserted if she ran first then joined?

Couldn’t hide the distaste reel from her voice. I’m sorry, but what?