Melissa’s Reviews > In a Heartbeat > Status Update

Ok, not sure I'm liking where this is going. First problem....They seem really immature to me. Like if they're a bunch of high schoolers. Second issue....where the hell are the contractions? Who speaks like that? We use contractions when we speak so it just sounds funny when it's not being used on sentences everyone I know would use them on. Especially with the maturity, these "kids" are showing.