Sarah’s Reviews > An Intriguing Deception > Status Update

This author is trying way too hard to be descriptive, it's clunky and just too much.

"Fine eyes squinted in disbelief until a handsome grin transformed his steely features into amiability."

I feel like I'm reading a series of Mad Libs. Don't know if I'll be able to see this one through to the end. I'm going to try, but....