Jo Jo O’s Reviews > Forever Moore > Status Update
Jo Jo O
is 22% done
I've got mixed feelings on this one so far. We're definitely jumping in hot and heavy. But so far Jake joking around about Tilly fucking her brother (she's not) was super weird and unnecessary...
— Jun 20, 2021 02:42PM
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Jo Jo O
is 60% done
Please tell me they're going to find out she's pregnant soon. I mean I saw it coming at what...25% in? And they haven't figured this out yet?
— Jul 20, 2021 08:23PM
Jo Jo O
is 50% done
I think what killed me the first time I tried reading this book was the grammer. It's not that it's bad grammer, but like... they over edited? The conversation between characters is super stiff and unnatural. Like "It is not something we talk about" instead of "It's not something we talk about."
— Jul 20, 2021 11:43AM
Jo Jo O
is 29% done
You know when you're reading something and you can see the "curve ball" coming from a mile away... I see what's going to happen... and it feels really unrealistic that this would be happening this early on...
— Jun 22, 2021 02:15PM
