Jo Jo O’s Reviews > Forever Moore > Status Update

Please tell me they're going to find out she's pregnant soon. I mean I saw it coming at what...25% in? And they haven't figured this out yet?

I think what killed me the first time I tried reading this book was the grammer. It's not that it's bad grammer, but like... they over edited? The conversation between characters is super stiff and unnatural. Like "It is not something we talk about" instead of "It's not something we talk about."

You know when you're reading something and you can see the "curve ball" coming from a mile away... I see what's going to happen... and it feels really unrealistic that this would be happening this early on...

I've got mixed feelings on this one so far. We're definitely jumping in hot and heavy. But so far Jake joking around about Tilly fucking her brother (she's not) was super weird and unnecessary...