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I seriously need to learn to DNF. This is not working yet. The beginning was confusing info-dumping/exposition, Ryan has no redeeming qualities yet. Why is Luke so adamant that they be friends or are friends (I did not see the friendship yet but apparently it's a thing). I'm confused
— Jun 29, 2021 02:13AM
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This is not improving. Still a lot of info-dumping... The MCs are inconsistent within the same chapter they think "I can't stand you", "I want to shag you", "I like you". They are "young" but still. We still don't know what happened to Ryan and honestly I'm not sure I care... I wish I DNFed and still might because this is putting me in a slump
— Jun 30, 2021 12:49AM
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Jun 29, 2021 02:26AM
As someone who doesn't DNF either, I get you, it's such a torture 💀 Hope this one gets better though!
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Candy wrote: "As someone who doesn't DNF either, I get you, it's such a torture 💀 Hope this one gets better though!"Thank you! I really think the DNF is around the corner. I just speed read the 2 epilogues (I'm weird like that) and I'm not holding my breath, it looks bad...
