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Susy
is 30% done
I am THIS CLOSE to dnfing this one. The male character “snickered”??! Really? A grown ass man snickered. And so help me God, if the heroine chews on her lip one more time, I’m yeeting my Kindle out the window.
— Jul 14, 2021 07:47PM
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Susy
is 26% done
It’s ok, if not a bit silly. Here’s the thing, this book has some of my writing pet peeves: phrases like “she bit her lip” (not an injury) and “he winked at her” (supposedly a flirtatious move?) Ugh. I hate those phrases!
— Jul 13, 2021 07:35AM
