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I haven’t seen a character so offended by being correctly called a “liability” since one Clary Fairchild back in 2008.
— Jul 15, 2021 11:35AM
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Avelyn
is on page 421 of 473
the way that “Pixieboy” is sorta implied to be a slur and yet everyone keeps using it like it’s nothing
— Jul 16, 2021 04:02PM
Avelyn
is on page 369 of 473
someone please direct Kal to the SJM books a few shelves down. i think he got lost
— Jul 16, 2021 09:03AM
Avelyn
is on page 332 of 473
it’s really not much of a plot twist if you leave out all of the information needed for the reader to predict it. it’s just unfair and lazy
— Jul 16, 2021 06:51AM
Avelyn
is on page 281 of 473
oh no not dialogue being described as a purr. this really is an sjm book but in ✨space✨
— Jul 16, 2021 05:50AM
Avelyn
is on page 257 of 473
why do everyone’s solutions to any given problem always include seduction?
— Jul 16, 2021 05:23AM
Avelyn
is on page 210 of 473
i’m honestly torn between whether it’d be better or worse to let the characters use actual swears or not. on the one hand, it would make them sound like actual people. on the other, it’d emphasize just how crude the writing is in it’s attempt to be, i guess funny?
— Jul 15, 2021 07:13PM
