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Suffers from some overwriting (e.g. nobody just smells anything, they “take the fragrance deep into their lungs”) and no sign of a plot yet, only heaps of backstory. Still, a sufficiently unusual setting for the WWII portion of the story that I’m happy to carry on.
Jul 21, 2021 05:19AM
The Song of the Jade Lily


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