Natasha’s Reviews > Nightwalk > Status Update

I had to stop reading and comment because this book is giving me a real "middle-aged divorced boomer vibe". The storyline is getting completely lost in the inane and sometimes awful internal banter of the protagonist. Like I probably could have felt more afraid of the gunfire and explosion but instead I'm stuck listening to the internal dialogue of Mark, which really detracts from any emotion about the situation.