Jenn (not Lily)’s Reviews > Taming the Omega > Status Update
Jenn (not Lily)
is 27% done
Annoying unannounced POV change in the middle of chapter 5 doesn't seem very promising...
— Aug 07, 2021 08:12AM
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Jenn (not Lily)
is 32% done
Another abrupt POV change, but I can see the extra line between paragraphs a little better this time, so I went back and found the hard return break at 23% -- a little too subtle a hand with the formatting compared to the story in general, people! (So it's there, but still annoying!)
— Aug 07, 2021 08:52AM
