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Crystal Babb
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Too many people look at her "a beat/moment too long," sometimes multiple times on the same page. It's compulsively readable but these things are stumbling blocks every time I come to them.
— Aug 08, 2021 10:24AM
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Crystal Babb
is on page 146 of 304
I like the idea, and the narrative is mostly fine, but this author uses a lot of simile to the point that it becomes distracting. Needs some editing.
— Aug 07, 2021 11:17PM
