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*oohm* ... do I really need to know what the boss's office looks like (even if he fires our hero for a ridiculous reason) in a 2 page detail? And so it goes on. In general there are funny moments, but somehow the author manages to write them very un-funny. Also a talent to have, I guess.
Needless to say - I'll leave super boring Harry (or is it Henry?) right here, when he comes off the buss to meet weirdo Levi.
Aug 11, 2021 07:42AM
The Chocolate Works

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