Amanda’s Reviews > Omega's Gambit > Status Update

Oh, honey. I'm not sure you're fooling too many other people than him at this point. The hubris. Ha.

Interested enough to read more than the sample, but unsure if I'm actually enjoying this? I find the prose really awkward, and I'm not a fan for using first person narration in this case. Hoping everything will click into place for me and this will go more smoothly.