butwhytho’s Reviews > One Step Closer > Status Update
butwhytho
is 33% done
I like Caleb less with every page, and I just can’t with Macy’s presence. I tried hard but this struggle doesn’t feel worth it. DNFing.
— Aug 20, 2021 05:49PM
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butwhytho
is 22% done
So, this punctuation is all over the place, and the H is on some whiny rich boy ish and isn’t very likable. This is feeling like a DNF…
— Jul 22, 2021 03:10PM
butwhytho
is 15% done
The H has referred to the h’s mom/his stepmom as a bitch 10x now. Not cute. Calling a woman you dislike misogynistic slurs and trying to justify it with “well she’s bad or I don’t like her” is as kosher as trying to justify calling a poc you don’t like a racial slur. Just sayin.
— Jul 21, 2021 07:21AM
butwhytho
is 11% done
If you’re gonna do a sex scene before the first chapter make it good. And so far, Caleb’s I’m a poor little rich boy who’s gonna rebel to piss off my dad while I misogynistically insult my stepmom schtick ain’t cute at all.
— Jun 30, 2021 06:46AM
