Austin’s Reviews > The Unraveling > Status Update

Okay. I’m struggling. I like the concepts. But there are either too many concepts, or they’re currently just too clumsy. At first I didn’t think I’d be able to finish, but now that I’m on page 60 I think some of the more confusing things are stressing me out less. If the author could just be consistent with their language that would be a big help.