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Krys
Krys is 70% done
It’s okay. I like the characters but the storytelling is very pedestrian. They walked over here and did this then had a BBQ then went to the store. I don’t think all the scenes have a purpose except “look how happy everyone is” and that’s getting old. I also don’t like how nearly every conversation is about the characters’ rough backgrounds. Yes, I know they were all homeless, do we need to rehash it???
Sep 07, 2021 03:00PM
Hot to the Touch (Brotherhood by Fire, #1)

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