Rachel’s Reviews > The Future Widows' Club > Status Update

I really like the story, but the author does not know how to use commas - doesn't use them when they're needed, and uses them in odd places. Also, I think she is trying to use a different euphemism every time she says someone is sleeping with someone...

this is really good. I could wish for a little less profanity, but it isn't terrible

this is very promising...