Jennifer’s Reviews > Night Pleasures > Status Update

Interesting so far, but written like a teenager wrote it. The inner thoughts of Amanda are childish. The random changes of POV are jarring. AND STOP ARCHING A SINGLE BROW. Seriously, I've lost count. Someone arches a brow every other page. On one page Amanda does it twice with mere paragraphs in between. People rarely do this in real life, and to have it happen this often is (clearly) annoying to read and picture.